Here is my query letter, and I would love feedback. Submit your own and I will respond.

Dear Agent 007

I have been recognised several times for writing and poetry. In my dystopian novel, HUDSON BY THE DAY, a lonely librarian, Adrienne Page thinks there is no way of escaping her isolated town. That doesn’t bother her until a boy from her neighbourhood disappears, like so many other young men in her community. As a committed mentor to the boy she vows to find him. By using her book smarts and curiosity, she manages to leave her community, but only to discover that she has treaded into a sinister outside world.

HUDSON BY THE DAY is 62 000 words. I look forward to hearing a response. You can reach me by email, or phone (555-555-5555) I have included 10 sample pages below.


The young novelist

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